
Surrounded by the snow
Blinded by the white brightness
The wind stings my face
これは愚作だと思うけれど、下手でも上手でもやっぱ英語じゃあ趣がねえ。。。
Our 6th grader son was researching on Akashi Kaiyo Bridge (a big bridge in Japan) yesterday, while he was agonized making a haiku today. Akashi Kaikyo Bridge was for his wood workshop class, while haiku was for his English class. Once we are in California, we feel Japan is closer even for the school assignment. I have a weird feeling towards haiku in English, but anyway here is the haiku he created.
Surrounded by the snow
Blinded by the white brightness
The wind stings my face
The essence of haiku is reading between lines, but in this one, I don't know what I should read...